I lay there – unmoved and docile,
feeling the sand beneath my feet,
being washed away every while.
The sun decides to call it a day,
horizon turns into a messy color pallet ,
from blues to reds and then grey.
The Cimmerian shade takes over,
waves sense their moment of freedom,
and become raucous and louder .
This show full of plentitude and exuberance,
is an everyday spectacle at the bay.
How can it give me so much peace?
I wonder as I walk back on my way …
How can it give me so much peace? - well, a break from monotony in the scenery - newer hues to see ... waves exuding the freedom... and the exuberent sounds on a shore... very unlike the dull grey life, the bounds of time and the sound of fones ringing!!
ReplyDelete"waves sense their moment of freedom,
and become raucous and louder." - Fav lines in this one!! :D
well painted!!
"How can it give me so much peace?".. wow, what lines...
ReplyDeleteWell written lines Devesh!!!
lively!!! I am visiting this page after so much time...looks like it has grow so much :)
ReplyDelete@ Appu : I agree, totally. Thanks bro.
ReplyDelete@ Samir : Thanks Sam.
@ Moss : We grow everyday ... page is just a byproduct :) Thanks for visiting bro.
Very nice. As always, the ocean is an endless source of inspiration. :)
ReplyDeleteWow..!!
ReplyDeleteLoved this line...How can it give me so much peace?
Keep penning. :)
Inshallah I would be going to the beach tomorrow evening myself and relive the peace again...I remember I used to spend many of my evenings in Goa at the beach looking at the sunset endlessly...mreading this made me nostalgic...
ReplyDeleteamazingly written...
Cheers to Life...
Che
beautiful...u have painted a scenery with your vibrant words.. :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful n lovely lines :)
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