I didn't write this mail just for that blog link I reckon....
May be I just wanted to see you online after coming home, like in good ol' days,
Or just send in a sweet mail, writing wonderful it was to see you in this horrible phase.
Or may be to tell you that we should do this more often...
I didn’t write this mail expecting a sweet reply …
May be I just wanted to wish you goodnight, like in good ol’ days,
Or to simply let you know everything beautiful always stays.
Or may be to tell you how the years have went by…
I didn’t write this mail to tell you something new...
May be we can just go out and roam in Colaba, like in good ol' days,
Or just sit across the table, eat and laugh about the world's funny ways.
I did write in to say - so much my friend, is long over-due...
Wonderful....!
ReplyDeleteHere it is, From Romil& Aditi-
ReplyDeleteI didn't write this mail, just to write
May be I wanted to say something but the words weren't just right.
Or just that I didnt know if you all would understand exactly what I wanted to say
But then I thought its better to try than to later say- 'WHY???'
Beautiful, loved it immensely :)
ReplyDeleteThis one is really beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThe best line I like is; Or to simply let you know everything beautiful always stays.
ReplyDeleteOnce again Wow..:)..!!
Wonderful is the word! :)
ReplyDelete"did write in to say - so much my friend, is long over-due..." :)
Tripti : Thanks :) Come back soon ..
ReplyDeleteAditi and Romil : happy to see you guys here :)
Radhika : Thanks a ton. Means a lot :)
Arti : Thanks. I also appreciate the feedback you
gave me on gtalk today. Thanks again.
Kirti: Thanks a lot ji :) Glad you liked it.
I relate to these lines... just now or then, I see in my phonebook, a name, while searching for someone's name..and I say to myself "Shit!!! I last spoke to him so many year back.. that time he was still studying.. where would he be now? Did he start working??? where he is now living? Has he finally got the girl he had a crush on? or has he move on??? There are so many things to catch up on.. It's long overdue.. let's give him a call"
ReplyDelete~ Absolutely loved these lines... "I did write in to say - so much my friend, is long over-due..." remain my favourite lines...
I didn’t write this comment to tell you how simple and moving this 'mail' is...
ReplyDeletemay be we can just go out and roam in the starry landscapes ofrajasthan and talk about these good ol' days...
Or just sit across the states, Gtalk, discuss and laugh about the world's funny ways.
I did write in to say that in all these years of not-knowingness..
So much my friend, is long over-due... That I think we shall have to start a new... :)
Do keep writing... it is beautifully put... touche
btw... I like ur writing skills as being developed. n don't be upset i just thot it was v.. mistakes happen yaar.. chill kar
ReplyDeleteThis i say is a neatly written emotion! And i guess for the first time out of all your blogs... this one just hit the right notes... coz i cud totally relate this one directly to myself!! :)
ReplyDeleteI wonder how many times i tried writing this sort of a thing... saved it in drafts and then deleted it later!! :)
Thanks for putting this down in words!! :D
@ Samir : Thanks so much bro. Overwhelmed by your kind words.:)
ReplyDelete@ Riddhi : Incredibly written lines. Very beautiful and meaningful. Rajasthan, Stars, Gtalk and those random discussions with you are already so special to me.
@ Saga : It's ok. Thanks so much for coming by and commenting. :)
@ Appu : Thanks bro. Your comment was long over-due :) I would still however, like to read your drafts :)
Really well written yaar.... dint know u were so good at this...
ReplyDeleteAs contrasted with the above comment... have known by now that you are very good at it... and am waiting... ;)
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